Documents/pictures - Maximum Ride Unofficial Community2024-03-29T14:11:11Zhttp://flockforum.ning.com/forum/topics/documentspictures-1?groupUrl=theitexarg&commentId=2971573%3AComment%3A80660&groupId=2971573%3AGroup%3A80578&feed=yes&xn_auth=noYes please, but remember the…tag:flockforum.ning.com,2011-01-17:2971573:Comment:888842011-01-17T18:26:28.822ZEndOfTheEarthhttp://flockforum.ning.com/profile/EndOfTheEarth
Yes please, but remember the explanation I sent you regarding the level of damage these papers should have, but also note that "Controversial figures in modern science" shouldn't be altered. Please also look at the Gameplan to see which documents need to be looked at soonest.
Yes please, but remember the explanation I sent you regarding the level of damage these papers should have, but also note that "Controversial figures in modern science" shouldn't be altered. Please also look at the Gameplan to see which documents need to be looked at soonest. Do you want me to work on the…tag:flockforum.ning.com,2011-01-17:2971573:Comment:888832011-01-17T18:21:20.750ZDevil's Sunrisehttp://flockforum.ning.com/profile/DevilsSunrise
Do you want me to work on these?
Do you want me to work on these? *and the older male; it willtag:flockforum.ning.com,2011-01-17:2971573:Comment:888512011-01-17T05:50:14.599ZSilverMoonArcherhttp://flockforum.ning.com/profile/SilverMoonArcher
<p>*and the older male; it will</p>
<p>*and the older male; it will</p> *I apologize for pestering yo…tag:flockforum.ning.com,2011-01-17:2971573:Comment:888502011-01-17T05:48:10.578ZSilverMoonArcherhttp://flockforum.ning.com/profile/SilverMoonArcher
<p>*I apologize for pestering you</p>
<p> </p>
<p>*He has clearly gone out of his mind</p>
<p>*I apologize for pestering you</p>
<p> </p>
<p>*He has clearly gone out of his mind</p> So I guess I'll suggest chang…tag:flockforum.ning.com,2011-01-17:2971573:Comment:888482011-01-17T05:46:44.344ZSilverMoonArcherhttp://flockforum.ning.com/profile/SilverMoonArcher
<p>So I guess I'll suggest changes and you see if you apply them.</p>
<p> </p>
<p>*they won't die for lack of strength or intelligence, but for lack of autonomy.</p>
<p> </p>
<p>*My idea is to take them to the retreat (usually reserved for staff parties) and train them for two years- the same skills they'd learn at headquarters, before leaving them completely alone for a year or two.</p>
<p>So I guess I'll suggest changes and you see if you apply them.</p>
<p> </p>
<p>*they won't die for lack of strength or intelligence, but for lack of autonomy.</p>
<p> </p>
<p>*My idea is to take them to the retreat (usually reserved for staff parties) and train them for two years- the same skills they'd learn at headquarters, before leaving them completely alone for a year or two.</p> Again, 'hefty bonus' seems to…tag:flockforum.ning.com,2011-01-17:2971573:Comment:888472011-01-17T05:41:08.309ZSilverMoonArcherhttp://flockforum.ning.com/profile/SilverMoonArcher
Again, 'hefty bonus' seems too bonus, almost slang. What about 'will be rewarded'?
Again, 'hefty bonus' seems too bonus, almost slang. What about 'will be rewarded'? The phrase 'the whole Eraser'…tag:flockforum.ning.com,2011-01-17:2971573:Comment:888452011-01-17T05:30:14.453ZSilverMoonArcherhttp://flockforum.ning.com/profile/SilverMoonArcher
<p>The phrase 'the whole Eraser' seems out of place. Would these scientists really use the name that the Flock uses? Maybe 'completely redesigning the lupine-human hybrid' would be more in-character.</p>
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<p><span style="text-decoration: line-through;">Am I being annoying? I'll stop if I am.</span></p>
<p>The phrase 'the whole Eraser' seems out of place. Would these scientists really use the name that the Flock uses? Maybe 'completely redesigning the lupine-human hybrid' would be more in-character.</p>
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<p><span style="text-decoration: line-through;">Am I being annoying? I'll stop if I am.</span></p> *between you and me
Just an a…tag:flockforum.ning.com,2011-01-17:2971573:Comment:888422011-01-17T05:24:58.799ZSilverMoonArcherhttp://flockforum.ning.com/profile/SilverMoonArcher
<p>*between you and me</p>
<p>Just an alert. My English teacher emphasized this, and that's what the squiggly line is for.</p>
<p>*between you and me</p>
<p>Just an alert. My English teacher emphasized this, and that's what the squiggly line is for.</p> tag:flockforum.ning.com,2010-12-30:2971573:Comment:876052010-12-30T21:42:46.510ZEndOfTheEarthhttp://flockforum.ning.com/profile/EndOfTheEarth
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