*nods* I'd scrap this whole story, but I've got nothing else, so....
@Nathan - I want to post something just to shame myself, but I'm too embarrassed and non-self-confident and private, and I think I've done enough in the way of shaming myself for a little while.
Yeah, but you've got a legion of fans and people who adore your writing and know how fabulous you are at it. My work, in general, just - all of it, sucks ass, so I don't really have that need to post anything....