Hey, nice to see you here, I meant to reply to you on MX but I gave up after the reply function failed 10 or so times. -.- Anyways, I'm going to bed but if you'd like to let people you talk to know about this place I'd appreciate it. Not much of a forum until it has members.
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-Z.
The flock has gone to a private boarding school, whilst there they meet a girl called Jamie (Jemima) who figures out they've got wings. (It's all form Jamie's POV) But basically she and Fang fall in 'love' and Max gets pissed. I can't give you much more without totaly spoiling it. (I've done a pretty good job of spoiling it anyway XD)
I've only written six pages so far... *shifty eyes*
However since I can't post it here I'm going to post it in the Fanfiction forum... However here's the first four paragraphs... Just for the sake of giving you the first four paragraphs....
The helicopter hovered above us, as everyone’s heads turned up cameras flashed and soon we were all staring at the yellow band that announced the coast guards. The blaring of sirens approaching from behind us causing yet more heads to turn. What was going on? Was someone hurt? Why hadn’t the helicopter landed? Questions blurred my mind as I watched the helicopter circle us.
All the while more people were joining the crow bordering the Cliffside. I couldn’t see anything wrong; just the open stretches of wiry green grass sprouting from the hillsides behind me, and the deep black shimmer of the sea at my feet.
I shielded my eyes, my arm braced across my face as I tried to block out the sun. I felt the throw of air whipping at my face and skin; the lapping of my hair and clothes against my body, as the helicopter approached.
We watched in silent anticipation, waiting to see the disaster that had called the coast guard out. The uniformed men ran forwards, and I blinked in confusion. They weren’t coast guards… The guns they held securely in their hands as they rushed out where pointed skywards, their black uniforms standing out against the bright foliage surrounding them. The white lettering on their uniforms declaring them proudly, and evidently, the FBI.
Protect the flock! From JP and Hachette!
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-Z.
Yeah, I know; I got a a warning for calling someone an idiot...
The world is cruel.
Tis only a week ban though...
(A long, long week...)
I'm writing poetry as we speak... Now, should my next poem be about Warnings or about Moderators?I gotta go eat dinner now. ^-^
You warn me,
And you warn me,
But I still don’t understand
What did I do wrong?
Mods,
Why did I get banned?
You say that,
I broke the rules,
But I still don’t understand
What rules have I broken?
Mods,
Why did I get banned?
You tell me,
I deserve this,
But I still don’t understand
I deserve to have my life shattered?
Mods,
To be unfairly banned?
You think that,
You are right,
But I still don’t understand
Why abuse your power?
Mods,
We deserve a second chance.
You need to,
Reconsider,
You need to understand,
We are people too,
Mods,
We deserve a second chance.
Please open,
Your eyes wider,
And try to understand,
We, have feelings too,
Mods,
We deserve a second chance.
I try XDTwo days left! *giggles*
Now lets go write a story.....
(I've written way too much Poetry already)(It's my first ever fanfiction XD)
The flock has gone to a private boarding school, whilst there they meet a girl called Jamie (Jemima) who figures out they've got wings. (It's all form Jamie's POV) But basically she and Fang fall in 'love' and Max gets pissed. I can't give you much more without totaly spoiling it.
(I've done a pretty good job of spoiling it anyway XD)I've only written six pages so far... *shifty eyes*
However since I can't post it here I'm going to post it in the Fanfiction forum... However here's the first four paragraphs... Just for the sake of giving you the first four paragraphs....
The helicopter hovered above us, as everyone’s heads turned up cameras flashed and soon we were all staring at the yellow band that announced the coast guards. The blaring of sirens approaching from behind us causing yet more heads to turn. What was going on? Was someone hurt? Why hadn’t the helicopter landed? Questions blurred my mind as I watched the helicopter circle us.
All the while more people were joining the crow bordering the Cliffside. I couldn’t see anything wrong; just the open stretches of wiry green grass sprouting from the hillsides behind me, and the deep black shimmer of the sea at my feet.
I shielded my eyes, my arm braced across my face as I tried to block out the sun. I felt the throw of air whipping at my face and skin; the lapping of my hair and clothes against my body, as the helicopter approached.
We watched in silent anticipation, waiting to see the disaster that had called the coast guard out. The uniformed men ran forwards, and I blinked in confusion. They weren’t coast guards… The guns they held securely in their hands as they rushed out where pointed skywards, their black uniforms standing out against the bright foliage surrounding them. The white lettering on their uniforms declaring them proudly, and evidently, the FBI.
XD oh well.
Hey. My other account got banned aswelll... *le sigh*
xD
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