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Protect the flock! From JP and Hachette!

Besides posting on here and replying to this thread. Original credit for this goes back to Fate and Nathan on MX.

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So, the class apparently loved my story.

WTF?
Isn't that a good thing?
It is, but it's suprising.

They've hated everything else I've done. Which, admittedly, has been poetry, but I digress.

And while I was sort of hoping for vaguely positive feedback, the good reviews I got were highly disproportionate to what I expected. I was expecting maybe one or two kids saying they liked it, the rest being more or less, "Eh, you could have done better."

Not the whole class complimenting me, without a single complaint about the writing itself.

Maybe it was because they couldn't hear me or something...they did complain about that.
Well, good. :D

I would have flat-out refused to present my work. >.> Ah, this'll be fun.
Next time, I'm bloody printing it out for them. >_> I refuse to read aloud for that long again.

Do you not like what you've written?
Not necessarily. But I lack considerably in speaking skills.

Giving it to someone and having them read it is fine.
As do I. :D

Great idea. Will do.
Chocolate lollipops, or chocolate flavored lollipops? The latter are disgusting.
Hell, I'd go as far as saying that chocolate flavored anything is disgusting.

Like those god damned chocolate energy shots. *shudders*
Agreed. If it's labeled as chocolate, it'd better damn well be chocolate.
Posted chapter 3.

Not my favorite, but I promise it'll get better soon.
"Not bad for an English project. I can't words, but two things I did notice.

- I see what you did with Doctor Acula, but this is like calling him Doctor Jeff since Acula is his first name. Yes. I notice these things.

- Uh... who the fuck is narrating? Did I miss that part out of retardation?"

--Nathan P

I can't word either. XD

1. Allright. Will fix.

2. A particularly quiet and shy girl who rarely adds her own thoughts to aid the narration. I have my reasons.

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