Protect the flock! From JP and Hachette!
What are you doing right now?
Besides posting on here and replying to this thread. Original credit for this goes back to Fate and Nathan on MX.
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Permalink Reply by o0_flying high_0o on
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Loved them. Full of cliches, but in a good way. You can almost hear the dry, slightly drunk voice over retelling the story in sepia tones. And Roland plays the ditzy assistant who just happened to notice a bit too much very well.
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Permalink Reply by nathan_p on
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I love noir, so getting to write my own has been a dream <3 Personally I haven't been rockin' on Jeb's private-eye narrative, but he does okay.
Roland turns into much less of a dumb blond in chapter 3, I swear ._.;;
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*noticed*
I am very fond of the bit at the end where Jeb resolves to ask Roland about the tie designed for tying wrists to bedposts over dinnerduring their date. -
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I was proud of that bit. 200 words about a tie. With loads of gay subtext. go nano go
It is completely a date. They fight over the check and Jeb insists that he's not really dressed to go out to somewhere nice. -
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Gay subtext? I didn't notice... XD
It's Jeb and Roland. In what possible universe would they not be dating? -
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Really? (Said tie is "the cause of my destruction".)
Well, they're not dating yet XD -
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*was kidding* (The Cause of Your Destruction? How so?)
They might as well be. And give it another couple of hours and they will be. -
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Oh good. (I dunno, I'll figure it out XD)
You are a mind reader, oh my god stop >.> XD -
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(Betraying everything you believe in, eyes locked firmly on all the tie, mind locked firmly on everything it represents, ie. sleeping with the handsome stranger sitting across from you)
*laughs* I have the power! Power that may or may not have been helped by the fact that you pretty much said so a couple of posts earlier... -
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Permalink Reply by Megan (Fishy) on
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Agh. *drops Nathan's noir fic to read this* *is now balancing five different readings, NaNo, and hw* *is getting confused*
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>.>
My opinion is on the next page. Well, as much of an opinion as I ever give, anyway. This is the first chapter I can't find it in me to be all *squee* about. Not that it wasn't well written, or anything, but....
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