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Protect the flock! From JP and Hachette!

Besides posting on here and replying to this thread. Original credit for this goes back to Fate and Nathan on MX.

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Thanks -- and good night.
\o/ Come bother me with what you thought when you're done?
:D :D :D Glad you like it. It only took like a forever to write, oh my god.
...is it a good thing that I've already started on the Valentine's day fic?

And that I suspect it's going to go right ahead and ignore me so it can morph into a chapter of RC?
My fic is a lightbulb *snerk*
Loved it. Roland and Jeb are so cute. I loved the line about hot chocolate. And his sister. Kyle and Reilly were fun, as per usual, but I didn't really feel like we got to spend enough time with Kyle's family. I feel like I got to know them more through the Thanksgiving chapter than this one, even though here we actually visited them. You almost need to split this up into two chapters, one on Jeb/Roland and one on Kyle/Reilly, to do them all justice.

And I /still/ want more.
Yeah >.> I want to revisit, uh, Kyle's folks goddammit why does he still not have a last name at some point. In all likelihood I might end up taking the chapter down for a bit so I can use some material I came up with but failed to use.

tl;dr: Oh god! I forgot to write about Kyle's family moar D: FUCKSTICKS
Does Reilly have a last name? That would be good. Kyle's family sounds like a lot of fun.
Y'know, I have no idea. XD That might come up at some point. Right. Expanding the middle section of that chapter as of now, and I'll post it here when I'm done (as well as updating the chapter on fanfiction).
*happy* And sorry for making your extra long chapter even longer.
It's cool *snerk* Kyle's family is a riot.
Yeah, I got that impression.

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