The thing about updates lately is that I have no set plan. Everything's based on how the chapter's going right that second. Right now, it's going pretty well for what I want this chapter to achieve.
Yes. He dominates the first section of the chapter... which is regrettably short, however. Oh well, at least he finally got some lines ><
Albeit. Probably the chapter after this one will involve some Jeb interacting with Ari :D (Well, okay, so not so much :D as "angst, pain, and fun shit like that", but you get my drift.) And Ari has a major role in the series, so he should have a larger role in the fic from now on as well. I'm gonna have so much fun.
*loves Ari* It'll be nice to hear from him/ about him, even if it's only the first short bit. It's not like I don't want to hear from the other characters *has too many characters I want to see in RC*
Well, "angst, pain and fun shit like that" might not be :D as such, but still Yay! Jeb/ Ari interactions. And angsty stuff is still great to read.
*giggle* I'm flexible, and I'm still in need of stuff to fill the months between "now" and TAE. Who else do you want to see?
Yeah, I'm looking forward to it :3 I'm not sure how I want to construct the chapter, though -- I'd love to let Ari have some of the narration, but he's five. Writing just his dialogue has been killin' me.
More Reilly and Kyle. Marian. Ari. I still want more Jeb and Roland. Lots of fluff. Although I'd like to see how the secret projects and all the plot stuff that was happening before Roland giving birth stalled all of that turned out. What else... basically I'm a greedy whore and want more of pretty much everything...
But he's an eraser five year old. The narrations in the secon book were nothing like the mind of a seven year old, I think. That said, if you have another possible narrator handy then you could do it in a similar way to... was it when Kyle met Ari? Having another character narrate.