Documents/pictures

[Devil's Sunrise]

A place for all of the letters, memos, photographs, reports, etc, be them finished or in progress.

[EndOfTheEarth]

[SilverMoonArcher]

Again, 'hefty bonus' seems too bonus, almost slang. What about 'will be rewarded'?

[EndOfTheEarth]

[SilverMoonArcher]

So I guess I'll suggest changes and you see if you apply them.

 

*they won't die for lack of strength or intelligence, but for lack of autonomy.

 

*My idea is to take them to the retreat (usually reserved for staff parties) and train them for two years- the same skills they'd learn at headquarters, before leaving them completely alone for a year or two.

[EndOfTheEarth]

[SilverMoonArcher]

*I apologize for pestering you

 

*He has clearly gone out of his mind

[EndOfTheEarth]

[Devil's Sunrise]

Good news, this letter is too late for you to revise the text in it. Awkward phrasing and etcetera can be ascribed to the fact that it's not written for the public, and it was written in a pissed-off haste. It's damaged slightly, but I made it readable.

Possible comment to go along with this:

The weathering that these documents must have gone through is extensive... It left strange warping, and my scanner that I'm using doesn't help. Luckily, in this letter, a lot of the text is visible, and what isn't can be figured out quite easily.

 

Then yadayada about the actual content of this letter. Today I was going to work on these, but I didn't get my medicine so I was a zombie all day. Tomorrow I'll have the full day to work on absolutely nothing, so I'll work on this, because I've so far put nothing into it. I should be able to get a few more images done, in the order they've been posted in. Let me know which ones NOT to work on, like if they're in production, or need to be revised, or something.

[EndOfTheEarth]

Here's a chart in terms of level of illegibility from lowest to highest.

1) STWAOES and later --> Single fold or very slight wrikeling. No stains. (Latest, like the time magazine, should have no damage)

2) Post TAE through SOF --> Some wrinkeling/foldig. Maybe a stain or two, but avoid major things if possible.

3) Jeb's idea through TAE --> Harder wrinkeling, stains, etc.

4) Anything earlier than Jeb's idea --> Yellowing, some wrikeling.

The files are all in chronological order on the gameplan page, if you wanted a source of reference.

[Devil's Sunrise]

Perfecto. Is the stain above good looking enough for this? Because that's about the extent of my skill in that area. I'm sort of learning as I go.

[EndOfTheEarth]

A little too good maybe, it looks like it got fished out of a puddle.

[EndOfTheEarth]