Permalink Reply by Xuut on December 13, 2009 at 4:24pm
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I can't ever bring myself to critic a friend's work. Especially if they're nice. God knows I'll butcher the grammar and spelling, but I can't do the actual writing. I'll have implications that it needs work but actually giving it...
I can do it to acquaintances and such, but my actual friends I can't. I just can't. Maybe you should suggest some slight improvements on things? Like saying maybe (if this is one of the problems) that the character should have a flaw or two.